Well, I've read the fan fiction in question, and it's not the same. At all.
I had some problems with converting Dreamerchaos' exact letter to panels, and everybody, who has written a graphic novel based on a text novel, knows that some things just don't translate well from one media to another, and there were lots of those situations here, so what I do here is an interpretation of her story.
Those, who know her fanfic: Yes, I will change the conclusion. When I was writing the image manuscript off her fic, this new conclusion popped up and wasn't in any way to be killed, and I was in rather great agony over this, but I decided that I would do my alternative conclusion, and that I would also mark it clearly, that the conclusion will be a different one than in Dreamerchaos' original story. Dreamerchaos' plotbunny has sprouted a plotbunnybaby, so to speak ;)-